I want to write about music and the changes it has went through throughout the past to the present. Music is my favorite thing in the world so I am curious to learn anything I can while also knockin out this project
Joe, I'm going to have to ask you to start from scratch. First of all, how music has changed throughout all of time sounds like an extremely broad topic that could fill an encyclopedia. Secondly, while I acknowledge that songwriting is a type of writing, "music" does not qualify as a writing construct. Think of a "rule" that you have been taught about writing, a convention of writing that you can test and QUESTION. Lastly, saying you'll be "knockin out this project" sounds to me like you consider this assignment an undesirable chore, which is not an attitude you want to share with your instructor.
Joe, I'm going to have to ask you to start from scratch. First of all, how music has changed throughout all of time sounds like an extremely broad topic that could fill an encyclopedia. Secondly, while I acknowledge that songwriting is a type of writing, "music" does not qualify as a writing construct. Think of a "rule" that you have been taught about writing, a convention of writing that you can test and QUESTION. Lastly, saying you'll be "knockin out this project" sounds to me like you consider this assignment an undesirable chore, which is not an attitude you want to share with your instructor.
ReplyDelete